Very nice again
And once again we have another great rendition to the story, i actually do love this story and like to see whats going on, and i must say in this particular one you gave the comic some more pazazz so it all kind of worked out for the best, The larger frame boxes are nice and seem to work aswell, so nice job there, maybe if the "CORDER-FRAMES" were colored it would be even better just an idea though.
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My only suggestion this time is to have the frames colored, but even if not its pretty good as is.
I really like how Blackie mentions that Eva could just shoot the guy. I'm guessing the reason she doesn't is because she's kind of surrounded by military people. Not a good idea to start an attack like that. I liked looking at the neat artwork and seeing all the little details. I notice that in one of the panels, Blackie doesn't seem to have strings that are attached to her bikini top. Of course, those things are so skimpy it probably doesn't even matter if they're there or not.
The visuals are great in this one, particularly with how there's those lines showing in the bottom panel. This is probably the first time I have ever reviewed a full webcomic. I'm not sure what Eva's nationality is, but I didn't think it was American seeing as how you are not one yourself. You are a talented artist. I hope you achieve some success with your work.
Cool job there.
Very nice work. Are you going to release some of your manga on Newgrounds?
they're everywhere.. even in Mindanao.
You are so true its always in bloody america!
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