I think you did a pretty good job! I could nitpick about minor details, but I'm more curious as to the man on the right's clothing: Was this entire thing done in pencil? Some of the shading is really smooth and I suspect charcoal or at least rubbing paper having been used.
haha, thanks for the feedback. Yeah, it was just a quick sketch, like I said nothing special, there's plenty of flaws. Looking back, I think I enjoyed drawing the cloth and the bow more than anything else. Also, this is digital, I wish I could afford the supplies to work traditionally