Baseball Bat Penetration

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Baseball Bat Penetration

Author Comments

Another sketch I found on my computer I figured I'd finish. My second adult rated submission and the rest are mostly E rated lol


This is just fucking funny XD


looks like a cigarette is in her ass lol kinky enough for me, well done

SillyBeans responds:

Please tell me you didn't rub one out to this piece of shit. lol ....bat.... silly woman, you're DOING IT WRONG!! D:<

I can see that you have improved on your shading, you have blended the colours well and I really like the way you did the dark areas for some really nice looking hard lighting. The colour palette is also pretty nice, too, I especially like the colour of her hair, always had a soft spot for purple, violet and vibrant blue mixtures.

Now onto the anatomy. The upper body seems fine, anatomically, however I think the back should arch backwards just a little bit more and the bum and legs should be a little bigger so it looks more like she is bending over, slightly. Speaking of the butt, I think you might need to work on arse anatomy ( as silly as it sounds). It looks kinda squared and doesn't seem to completely compliment the thighs to well. It doesn't have to be completely accurate, anatomically, but try using several butt pictures at different angles and sizes to see how a bum, well, works as a muscle.
For the head, I personally think that the jaw line is to high and the chin is too pointed. Try lowering the jaw a bit and kinda round the corner from the actual jaw line leading up to the ear (only just a little rounded, as in only just noticeable).

I feel like a bastard for saying that, so i'll end with this, I really dig the concept, I think its pretty funny as well as kinda neat, to boot. I also really like the design of the character, I would mind seeing her again in your other work, she seems cool. Anyway, don't let the criticism discourage you, keep at it, keep improving and I look forward to seeing your other work in the future

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SillyBeans responds:

no no, don't feel bad, this was exactly the type of helpful review I've been looking for! Thanks! It's hard to find a really good well thought out review like this, so thanks a ton! I will look at this and use this to improve.

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Credits & Info

2.90 / 5.00

Jun 23, 2015 | 4:40 PM EDT
File Info
4167 x 4167 px
9.3 mb

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