I think the eyes turned out great! :D
Thank you!! :D
neck very long, chin TOO angular, actually the whole face is kind of too sharp the cheekbones and such hair is good especially 4 a newbie to anime drawing of this kind but could be better, eyebrows are grand eyes could have more depth to them- something that makes her look human- in cartoon form at least lol. But some kind of feeling in them even if it's just in the irises.
Right now she just looks like a robot or someone who is creepily possessed telling there friend in a lilting sing-song voice 'it's ok- let's go back inside the house, there's no where else we can go right now anyway. Riiight?' like that.
Stare at her eyes for 3 minutes without looking away, you'll see what i'm talking about!! XD
You could try experimenting by giving her freckles, that might be cute :)
Well for starters there are no cheekbones at all, sooo.... I understand where you are coming from though. However, I think you might have gone way too in depth with what the picture actually is lol
But thank you all the same!! :D
It's a nice face.
won't be innocent for long
Seems like you spent a bit of time on this, but because we are supposed to tell whats good and whats bad; here is what I think. The neck is a little too long, you could do with out the folds (lines) between the eyes and eyebrows. Looking at it the chin seems to be short on the left side and longer on the right. other than that its great. the shading is beautiful, the eyes are perfect, and the colors work great.
Thank you!! That's what I need haha I'll keep that in mind for next time, and I really appreciate your feedback :)
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