The character on the left has too prominent cheekbones and a thick, disproportionate nose; it offsets the rest of his features. I really like his hair, but I don't know why it is jumbled at the top, it would look much better if it remained flat.
I love the expression on the girl's face and all of her features. Her peering eyes and smirk really add a nice touch to her overall look. Her hair is perfect, though her collarbones look peculiarly fraud.
I would like to see an updated version of this, with more detail and better facial proportions. Good luck, Simply.
Right on, thanks for checking out some of my other stuff and thanks for writing the review.
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