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Steamy Veluptuous Kaiya

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Constructive criticism welcome as always

Edit 5/11/13: Changed her expression to a less cartoony one, redrew foot, minor tweaks all around

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Kind of a dull image, Not that much background image would of been nice to give it some life or something not badly detailed though,

But from her position (switch yourself standing her direction) her right eye seems a bit less detailed (worked on) then the left eye not sure if this is on purpose but seems like that to me.

4/5 overall.

Best regards,

Chaos114. :)

SilentJohn responds:

Thanks for the review, I'll try to make the color scheme a little more vibrant next time

what's with her foot?

SilentJohn responds:

Redrawn. Better?

Very good! The only thing I would say is work on her lower rejoins a little more. Just a bit around her right side.

SilentJohn responds:

Tweaked. Hopefully I fixed whatever it was that looked off.

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SilentJohn
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Uploaded
May 10, 2013
3:19 PM EDT
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675 x 900 px
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