Author Comments

character and original line work belongs to HowSplendid ;)


That Kimono is too big for her small body,but everything else is great.

SileNt-Sam responds:

dude that's the idea .. it's falling of her body , glad u like it :3

There are some nice details, everything has a nice even gradient to it and sharp lines. However it lacks some depth, there are very few dark zones, only highlights. For instance her legs should be in partial shadow but in general darker then then the upper body. It could really make the overall image really pop.

As a whole, it's nice but it's missing something.

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SileNt-Sam responds:

yeah i knew something is missing >.< maybe some shadows like you said ..
thanks man i really appreciate it :)

This is quite nice. My favorite little detail for this drawing? Looking at the background you can make out a faint outline of a tree, that's just a nice little detail that goes a long way. Nice one!

You've come even farther along in regards to shading since the last time I reviewed your work. Always nice to see progress coming along with your work.

Seeing as line art was used I cannot really judge you on how she looks exactly.

As for color, I like how it looks like light has lightly taken a glimpse at her thighs and it shows. THe orange slowly fading out is a cute little detail for this. Then the pink kimono itself is also very nicely done. With the way it is on her, makes me think it is about to fall off possibly and she's trying to prevent it from falling off.

The detail for the knees is good. Just a little line on each leg to show where the knees are bending. Her facial expression seems to show a mix of confusion and possible annoyance at her kimono nearly falling off of her. The hair style is cute too. The way it is done makes me think it is layered with black underneath and orange on top.

Also, the panties are nice and simple in detail, not bad.

Lastly, would be cool if you tried this character again in the future but without using line art as a reference.

Overall, very nicely done, hope you continue to improve your art as you keep on going. :)

SileNt-Sam responds:

thanks a lot man i really appreciate it :)

Nice One :D Can You Draw Female Braixen Please? :))))

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SileNt-Sam responds:

thanks ^^ sure :D

I love it :3

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i'm glad you do ^^

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Credits & Info

2.59 / 5.00

Feb 22, 2014
9:48 AM EST
File Info
2000 x 2400 px
1.5 MB

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