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ELECTROKENESIS Page 1

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Page 1 of a comic I'm starting: ELECTROKENESIS, a Madness Combat comic on my character “Shocker” and what happened after he woke up.

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seems like an okay first page, i'd suggest investing in a few alcohol markers and then sticking to flat and neat fills of colour to give your characters a more iconic feel through the use of colour palletes (for example, ONLY yellow for "shocker", and maybe ONLY red for antoher character (with the exception being a colour pallete of 2 or 3 colours.).

Also, the layout of the panels seems very sparse on this page, so unless it's a one off (given by the large title at the bottom, i think it is), i'd condense it a bit more to make each page more worth reading/looking into.

ShootDaCheese responds:

The media I’m using is some pencils for basic outlines, then reoutlining with sharpie pen. I’ve never used alcohol markers before but maybe I can look into it. I’ll also see about adding more per page, I do realize that action is pretty little with so much free space, I intended for the page to just throw you in at the start.

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