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The remake trio

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i made this a few months ago not as good as my newer pictures,

Left to right are

Khori, Anne and Nicole
they are my characters.

i know the proportions are bad, its an old pic. i've spent the last while improving.

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humph

I like your style, but... you should really improve your human anatomy skills/ knowledge/ whatever

euagh... Proportions people!!!

right lets start from left to right seen as these reviews are ment to help you improve... *Khori - legs are tiny and have no realistic bending... they look like bendy rubber legs, make them wider and more pronouned, face looks flat beacuse her left eye is to far to the right and should be further to the left *plus* mabey a tad bigger...* *Anne - similar to Khori on the leg front... but they arnt as bad, they look thin compaired to a style of art...* *Nicole - the only one that seems in proportion... (apart from her right leg) which seems to thin again... work on the hands a bit more as well... they are one of the hardest things to get right... also her head looks massive, her hair shouldnt be that far up* shading isnt bad, simple 3/4 tone is good with well placed highlights... try to get some pratice drawing the body parts in motion or just try alot of different poses to prefect the art of the body before detailing them...

:)

Thanks for all the voice acting, I'm surprised to see your art. Anyway, I suppose this may be a good alternative to DA.

Oh, and by the way, the proportions are NOT bad!

Good job, keep it up.

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