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Off-Duty

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Inspired by Evangelion (as you can probably tell) u_u;

Originally titled 'A perfect day to be off-duty'

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Ha ha...duty
Wow teach me how to do clouds!

He sorta looks small and sorta big because of the grass and the pigeons, but how you lighted some parts looks really nice and the clouds looks as they should be so overall it's pretty good.

ShinsukeIto responds:

Thanks!! :)

Interesting, the color scheme is really eye candy here. Lighting is amazing, although in this context the white streaks across the pink metal are a little generic; you might be able to reflect some of the sky in those gleams very gently. That said, it's way cool that the birds cast a shadow on the mech. The pose, details, etc. are really nice as well. The only problems I see are the proportions of the mech. Its torso is a little too thin, and the legs seem a bit off (though this may only be due to the torso in proportion to it). The arms also seem to have a lot more detail than the legs, which is weird. Love the grass and clouds though.

ShinsukeIto responds:

Thanks a lot for the review, Kwing!
Ahh, thanks for pointing out the flaws as well, the constructive criticism is always helpful.
I also rushed a bit toward the end (something I tend to do a lot x__x), so that's why the legs don't have much detail.

Thanks again!

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