Ok so i got around to reviewing this one, Now compared to the other one this one is less cramped which i mentioned so im glad to see you take some of my advice, and i do get a pleasure in reviewing your work just as much as i enjoy getting them responded too, but anyways this has some better use of colors then the other one, I do however think it needs some "STARS" in the backround though, since this does remind me of outer space and all, I also like the being in the middle it kinda reminds me of those spirit things from avatar, now that might be an idea for you there with your lighting effects you could really make something like avatar beings or something, but anyways i thought this was pretty decent, much more improved since the last one.
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
some stars would really light this up abit
thank you very much for the review.I now seem to feel the errors
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