There are some good things and some bad things here. First the good things. Again, it is well composed. The big Alaric saint, holding the Piona figure here - with his flowing hair adding to his presence. The expression on his face is successful in portraying a guarding, watching feeling of safety. Her pose and expression really convey feeling safe and protected - at ease.
Her left arm/shoulder shouldn't be visible like that though, with a fully drawn outline. Her hand is nice, but his fingers seem really... disturblingly strange. Overall, nice job.
My troubles with hands, you know. I still have a lot to learn and I am still developing my full potential. My really good "drawing career" started last December, so there is a lot to experience still.
Thank you for your interesting review.
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