Love you attention to detail, but I do agree that it seems to busy. It'd help if you could separate the main hero in the foreground from the background. The expressions are well done, however.
And your bunny is really neat. (I might be biased, I did a haggis bunny, lol)
Really good. Honestly. My main critique is that it may be a bit too busy. With such an intricate design for the character, the viewers eye gets lost on the page. Other than that, it's great. Good luck:)
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