Got its problems...
But it's Kirby...How can you NOT like Kirby? Anyways, the Warp Star and Kirby look fine, but the water looks plain and looks like it's at an awkward angle. If you add a bit more detail to the water and put it at a 180 degree, it would like, but it just looks boring. As for the sky, it needs a few more stars, and it could definitely use some work. Also, the light source is completely wrong, and the moon needs to be shifted to the left to make it correct. However, don't feel obligated to put the moon in the empty space just because there's nothing there. Maybe you could add a mountain or something instead of screwing yourself over by placing the moon in the wrong place. The clouds need some work, too. This IS Dreamland after all, so make them fluffier and friendlier looking. Though it is nighttime, there's no excuse not to have fluffy clouds, especially in a place like Dreamland, where it looks child-like and friendly.
Sorry for the long critique, and I hope all of the ADVICE I have given you will help. Just fix the few things I pointed out and this picture would be a masterpiece! I look forward to seeing more from you! You show potential, but you've gotta harness it and use it! Good luck and I wish you the best of it!
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