Okay...I'm going to be straight with you. It's terrible. I honestly don't like any of it, but I'll give you a 3 for effort. For one, the premise is dull and lacks edge these days. You need to come up with a more original idea. For two, the style is a helluva lot simpler than your Kirby picture, which I honestly like a hell of a lot more. You only have a character, and the word "friend". I understand the ideas you are trying to convey, but it honestly feels like a complete fall to the face. I just...Don't know what to say for this one. You seriously need to think of something a little bit more detailed, and a lot less simple. Also, just the concept alone needs a major facelift. I don't know...I just can't bring myself to like this piece...
Anyways, good luck next time, and I look forward to your next piece.
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