This was neat and strange and very impressive, it has a certain artistic feel to the art style and it was just strange but that was a good thing, I really liked it, This was a pretty good drawing here lots of detail shown, I would suggest adding maybe some slight "BACKROUND" details, but in reallity you did well on this one love the fine detail. No entry gets the perfect award, But what this entry does offer Is a good balance of what works and some elements that you did bring forward are a nice fit.
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Other than that its a decent piece of art all in all. Like I say for most pieces of art it would be cool to find a few new ways of improving on some areas of needed attention. I would suggest adding maybe some slight "BACKROUND" details, maybe even adding a tad bit of color just one or two areas with added color.