I actually really like this, at first sight my thought was "wow, it's a ton of scribbles", but in actuality it's a very deep piece. I like the way that it was done, with a ton of scribbles, it adds chaos to it, which I can only imagine ties in with the theme of pressure, torment. See, now you're making me get all deep and whatnot.
Very well done, raw and powerful. Keep it up.