October beach


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Characters from my new series Eternity X: In the Art of War

October and her sister Fawna chillin' out on the beaches of Memoryfields,
taking it easy!

Photoshop CS4


I appreciate art.

But I just do not like this as much as I though I would when I saw the thumbnail.

You draw faces wonderfully but the body of this woman is not proportional and I think it throws the whole thing off.. And her tail and butt just seem not right.

I must say the water is beautiful, and the sky, although clouds are not that hard to draw.

Good job, if you practice more I think you will be great. =D

Sevens responds:

thanks for giving me an 8, but your review ain't helpful

good art!

I really like your style and colouring is great!

I just cant understand why somebody dislikes this...

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not sure what the tentical is all about

Great proportions on the main girl, i can sense a real structure within her. also spectacular butt.

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Sevens responds:

thanks for the comment, yeah she does workout- and that's her tail.
stylized pictures of them

eh...needs some work...

first thing I noticed was the face, it looks more like the face of a male anime style character, and the hair doesn't this help either. also the tail looks really awkward, I think it should start at the very end of the backbone. either way it shoulden't squirrel upward like that quickly anyway.

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Sevens responds:

thanks for checking them out oh and I checked out your work too.
thanks for you advice.... doesn't help to let you know.


Good piece but you should work on the face of the girl in the foreground. The jawline makes her too manly for the eye to distinguish.

Sevens responds:

thanks for checking them out- hmmm didn't see that. you must be a master!
sorry that you can't distinguish that.

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4.10 / 5.00

Jan 26, 2011
2:21 PM EST
File Info
800 x 862 px
399.6 KB

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