I enjoy the art in that the colors are soft and pleasing and the roughness of the edges actually works well in giving life to the imagery. The text however really needs something behind it. 'Could just be a transparent white backdrop surrounding the letters, but how it is now isn't working for you or the reader at all. Keep going with the art.
I thought about using the white bubbles even transparent ones... but you know I was thinking about it and I don't want to lose my backgrounds, but I do take this comment and listen, I might change it up-
we shall see...
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