They WILL really smiles at you. I think the hair are too much in the front, better keep it outside the skull. If you don't mind, you could draw the skeleton too. And one thing, the bone's crack at the nose doesn't pretty well. Btw you can keep it up! it's 4.0!
I dont know what is wrong whit you... but is good anyway :S
Nice! I love creepypasta <3 Nice work, man.