There's still a lot you need to work on though.
Most of it is off proportionally- neck is too thick, arms and body don't seem natural and the 3/4s view on the face looks strange. A couple of other nitpicks would be the hair seems to just sever around the ear and doesn't seem to flow correctly in the darker areas.
My suggestion is completely redo the face proportionally and do a better job on the body, or vice-versa. The fact they don't really seem to match bothers me the most.