WTF? Seriously....... Not much to it
This is pretty terrible.
Your character models are completely stiff, and over all, your muzzles look like someone repeatedly smashed them with a fist.
Your text is added on, and looks terribly distracting with the seeming sloppy addition of them into this comic.
The coloring is almost adequate, but then the shading makes almost no sense what so ever.
You need tons more practice.
This artist has not been scouted yet.
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