Again, your mastery of lighting and portraying movement shows. The background, the stars and even the composition really add to the whole "just us two" atmosphere and I am honestly jealous of how well you did the shadows. Also I see you haven't quite given up on line art yet. It'd be dope if you maintained two artstyles, the sharper line-driven style and the more dreamlike painting one.
But, and there's always a but, I can't bring myself to ignore Jean's cursed eye. Just look at it, her right eye's practically coming out of her temple and this is made especially uncanny by her somewhat realistic skull shape.
Nobody's perfect, though, and it's not like I could have done any better. Just think of this piece as a lesson for the next and never stop improving!