Pffff, I love this! I saw it on twitter. You should totally make more of these!
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Some dumb comic I drew of my friends c:
I see a style in here. But it seems to be un refined. You got something cooking though. Bottom left panel the arm is too loose it just seems messed. Other notes are the text, it's a bit too stylized making it hard to see it all clearly. Not too hard just unnecessary.
Remember you need to reject the haters and the lovers to leave a healthy middle.
SeafoamPanda responds:
Man yeah I thought the text would be a bit hard to read. I have really messy hand writing so I gotta work on it. And thank you for your input on the style! Honestly I was sorta just experimenting with it so its not surprising to hear it seems a bit all over the place haha. I agree about the arm though so Ill work on that next time! This was sorta just some dumb thing I wanted to do quickly but I appreciate getting constructive critique like this, so thank you :D.
Ah, the silent panel. It helps build tension! ;) Good work, I like it.
SeafoamPanda responds:
Haha thank you!
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