I can see flaws here. One of which is how the sideboob was shaped horribly. Another is that there's some white space around her hair and shoulder, and her legs (most notably the knee).... it needs to be smoothed out or re-drawn. Anyways, keep trying.
Thanks, always appreciate constructive comments! I used to make vector artwork, now I try my best in paintings and like you said I'm going to keep trying :)
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