you're puctures good, just remove the weird red thing in the back (because no one can tell what it is), make the hands more obvious (so draw arms), perhaps change the outfit (but it's passable), and make the skin tone consisten (because a red head and white ands don't match). Also. change the title, wishing... it's not here, sinistry is, but not wishing, I mean.. I don't lmow exactly what is here!! but it's not wishing!! I hope this helps.. somehow..
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