Woah, hey you totally got this! I can absolutely see reading this. My only complaint (if I were to pick it apart) would be the panel where she's talking a lot, and there's a big speech bubble behind the characters. It looked a little "cheap" to me for some reason, maybe it was just the color choices? But again that's just being a nitpicker, the style is cutely awesome, shading and colors are good, and I love the hand-drawn feeling it has. Great work, I can't wait to see where you go from here.
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Crystal is dead and in limbo awaiting judgment. She starts to get sick of the wait and ends up whining and complaining, only to meet The Goddess of Life's right hand star, Chise.
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just wanted to test uploading a few comic pages into one post, hope this works @_@
this may be the start of the webcomic i want to make.. maybe... idk lol i still don't even have a title for it yet, and i dunno know where i should upload every page. maybe here on newgrounds? :0 as well another site or two that host webcomics? hrmmmm
i still have a lot i want to work on but i think i'm finally ready to just start making this damn comic already. been wanting to since i was in high school, i rly need to stop hesitating lol
sooo yeah! pls enjoy c:
Pretty darn nice...I like the color choices and how they are changing as time is passing in the early panels. I imagine this could be a fun webcomic...have you considered ComicFury for hosting the comic? It's free, you don't have run ads, it has that usual webcomic format with pre-made layouts and the ability to customize 'em and/or make your own from scratch.
Much as I love NG getting all the use it can, I'd say for a full-fledged comic, a regular post here letting us know there's new pages on another site or something would probably be enough!
sailormika responds:
thank you!!
oh i just found out about comicfury recently, that's one of the sites i was most interested in posting on :0 it sounds really good, thanks for letting me know more about it!
ah i see, yeah i could probably make update posts here and link to comicfury or something ^^ ty again!
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