I found this picture to be at least good. I don't know how often hentai is frontpaged. This did, however, show no graphic depiction of private parts. It was at least more sexual than most of frontpaged stuff. You are quite talented. This does seem exactly like what you'd expect from a doujin magazine.
I should know more about Japanese text. She has a pretty innocent expression. I think she's a nun. Is that what "fumino serizawa" means? The checkered background is nice too.