Is it weird that I actually like the one part where her hair is unfinished? Maybe the b&w lends itself to doing something deliberate like that? I'd be interested in seeing a piece really playing that up: lots of sworling hair with different bits blending into the bg. Come to think of it, the water could be a great element to play with that sort of deceptive imagery too. Maybe this picture is good for inspiring something later on? :D