This was frontpaged? Wow, I am quite surprised. I am sorry, but this doesn't look good to me at all. Was it supposed to be like this? If it was, it looks like most people didn't get the joke. I certainly didn't.
You do to do better with eliminating the white around the barriers. The lines look so childish. Are those supposed to be clouds? They look like gray hearts. It looks like the Sun's giving off these weird waves.