I see you got some talent in ya, kid, because you can notice the differences in lightning and trying to also fit it into the picture. In my opinion you should've put more effort into hair-drawing put you are certainly getting somewhere ;)
Thank you very much! I'm hoping I'll improve as I get more acquainted with fireworks, though while I was drawing this the program was slow and slightly dysfunctional so I may look for an alternative.
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