it's a really good attempt. Though the angle may seem off to some. The head and face are a little small. The details of the face are a little hurried. They need to be sharpened and shapes up a bit more. With the blank background, I'm assuming the artist wants us to focus on the character. It's a really good attempt and other than the details in the face, there's really no other flaws with it.
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I have no major changes for this as it was an awsome piece