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Thought it would be a fun challenge to do an actual comic book page.. using that previous image as the start of a potential story. This is what I came up with.. New to actually doing comics, so let me know on how readable it is and such. Feedback is good.

(Took into consideration a previous reviews feedback, thanks! Hopefully I did it better Decky. :S)

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This shit is to funny :3

Rhunyc responds:

Haha, glad you think so!

This is looking great! Thoroughly amusing to read! I really like the the colours, and you're doing a really great job depicting light and shadow, my main suggestion is to define the details and anatomy of the characters a little more clearly, can't wait to see what you do next, and I can't definitely relate to Megagerbil's concern with the banana situation.

Rhunyc responds:

Cool! Thanks for the feedback!

DAMN that guy is patient! Reads well and I like how silly it's becoming already. Keep up at it!

Rhunyc responds:

Haha indeed he is. And thank you! I'll try :D

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Nov 14, 2014
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