Overall nice colors. Background is fine, no need to change it.. As for the character:
Her face looks strange because it's too rigid and not soft enough. Same goes for the eye we do see, it's pretty sharp and has those lines underneath it which cause it too look masculine.
A few other issues:
The buttocks are a direct contradiction to the stomach. We cannot see both buttocks, as well as the front of the stomach. Simple fix would be to just remove her right buttock.
Her left foot looks fine, but her right foot looks like it got small too fast. I understand you wanted perspective, but it's not quite right, in both it's size as well as it's position is impossible since the stomach suggests she is angled and not directly sideways, meaning we shouldn't even be able to see that foot at all.
All in all, good efforts. Just need more refinement, and less contradictions.
fantastic review dude, we don't see enough of this these days.
you make some great points that are pretty spot on,
thank you :D
its people like you that make all the effort worth it
wow even the background is awesome
thank you very much
Not bad at all.
I would just change a bit the feet, maybe that left nipple... but the face looks a bit weird...
Anyways, tits+ass=instant like with most NG users, and I can't be very critic as my art is crap...
Just work a bit further those proportions. Well done!
i think the face looks a bit weird because she only has the one eye, i think she needs a better background.
thank you :)
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