I think EnactJudo wants you to add a hint of depth and perhaps a belly button, so the area is not so flat.
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i wanted to make something a bit dark and seductive, i used stock images for refference, the images are listed in this link if anyone is interested,
this was all done in paint tool sai,
please comment and let me know what you think
Rennis5 responds:
her belly button is under her hand, i think it would look strange anywhere else but thank you
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not bad but the shadowing look funny to me i can find why it bothering me
Rennis5 responds:
it might be the clock, there is no shading on the clock and that distracts me every time i look at it now
Not bad at all. Maybe could have touched up the midsection and added a little more depth to the sheets she is laying on but overall excellent job.
Rennis5 responds:
i'm not sure what you are referring to in the mid section?
maybe you mean her mid section is too plain and i should have put some more tone on it?
i did do a rush job on the sheets but i'm very glad that you liked it
thank you
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