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Blue at temple

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i just did this all today, it is a complete re-make of another of my submissions,
i just wanted it to look better then the old one

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uh i can help with his explaination

for one the neck of this guy is very thick.
if u were trying to go for a buff guy look u made the legs quite small.
and there is the arms, they look awkward, there to straight. u should put some joints in his arms. but his right arm is especially weird. the arm looks like its been twisted, and he is holding the weapon in a weird way.
the weapons handles should also be thicker, such a guy wouldnt be able to hold on to that thing with handles so small.
the head is also quite large and u have misplaced the eyes. they look crooked.
it also doesnt make much sense how hes covered in blood but theres not a single dead body around.
and it would be cooler if u added more detail to the pillars.
u should also shade a little bit more.

but dont worry. skills come in time, and hard work.
and u still have alot to learn

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Uploaded
Apr 17, 2011
8:30 AM EDT
Category
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