Quite an experimental piece, I must say. While I do like the aesthetic, I think that the softened brushstrokes combined with some of the sharpened lines don't mesh together too well. Auditor looks pretty great, but the atp could use some work, as well. The humanness of the auditor and the plain madness shape of the atp also don't go together well. Either make the piece bigger so there's more room for detail on him, or use a smaller brush.
TL;DR: While there are some things you could improve on, I enjoy the style and would like to see you use it more, good job! :D