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LOVE DELAY \ One-Shot Comic PART 1

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The concept, fun and imaginative. The execution, gripping and not like many...

Page 7, Nonsense...not nonsence.
the exposition on page 8, should be broken into chunks more visually...
i know she's a data base that can run large files and all that, but readers like to be more ergonomic.
page 10 does it in squares, page 8 had potential to be broken into topic paragraphs.

i'm very excited for part 2. Good development of character and shape consistency :)

And that way is... to kill Tyro? I can see this taking a dark twist after this. XD Do like how this is mixing the comedy with that more serious subject matter, and entangling all into the realm of AI and potential future hurdles as well. Starts great...

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POSTBOY
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4.07 / 5.00

Uploaded
Feb 19, 2020
12:03 AM EST
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Illustration
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1984 x 2806 px
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