Amazing talent you have!

Pretty good

The head's way too big and the neck long, there are a few rough spots here and there, and the tit looks bulbous. I really like the make-up around the eye and the eye itself. Oh, and the folds a bit to the right of the armpit look stiff; not very natural. I'm pretty sure the fold under her tits would be at a concave curve, not convex, especially since they're popping out. The lines of the sleeves and the "v" area over there are too blurry. The shirt has some light spots t the left that are supposed to make it shiny, but there's something about them that I don't like. Maybe they're too shiny. The yellow outline around her and her hair looks good and her make it stand out. The background's kinda simple, but it fits with the "theme" here. Unless she's supposed to be taking her own picture holding the camera, her arm is too far back. Good job and work on those folds and little roug spots around.