Ummm...WAY too simple
There a thousand things that could have been done to warrant this pic at least a 5, but this is just soooo bad. I can understand if this was used for a flash movie, but it's too simple for still life. Seriously, I could do this in not more than 10 minutes...It looks like you just rushed it, and didn't bother to be creative at all. This is a bad way to start as an artist, and this road leads nowhere but to ruin.