Actually, it IS too big. The "normal sized" one would be perfect. When it's too big, the viewers don't get to see much when it's brought to full size. Consider the resolution of most monitors. Mine is 1920x1080, but with a 25 inch widescreen, all I can see is the upper left corner- a wing tip to the talon and that's all. :\
Also, the boob eyes make no sense. But being what they are, you should really reconsider your thumbnail and the E rating.
The "normal size" is exactly the same as this one but dA doesn't show it in XXXXXXXXXXXXXXL like NG does.
The boob eyes make no sense, the human face makes no sense, the 6 wings make no sense, looking for sense in paintings makes no sense, of it was supposed to be just like in reality, I would take photos instead of painting.
I don't see the problem with the thumbnail, maybe you talk about it because it's a tit but I don't see the problem with tits.
Of course that if you clicked for tits, you were probably disappointed, which to me really isn't a problem.
The real major problems are the right front wing, the lack of a background and the terrible size.
I could try fixing a few problems but I have no interest in adding more to the painting and I really don't understand a thing about resolution and all that, for now I still have the excuse that I'm using a tool I'm not familiar with and before using it I never used a tablet/computer to draw.
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