I like the way they're both turning their heads together, makes you wonder what they're looking at.
A little tip: Light usually get it's color from bouncing off colored objects so it's not often this saturated or localized. This makes it look like they're at a club. The dimmer the light the more saturated it can show up so you could've had some really cool looking effects by softening the atmospheric light and laying it down hard on the edges of the characters closer to the right.
Thank you!! I will be sure to keep this in mind and apply it next time :)
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