One Thing...
...The hands and arms on all the characters (The pink-hair girl, Alke and even the Sora on the floor,) all need a bit of attention. Try using a ball and joint figure or have one of your friends/family to pose for you, this will help a great deal when sketching and drawing. (Try to copy what Axle is doing with his hand and arm in the picture...Impossible, right?) If you legnthen the hands and add elbows to your figures, the pic my just score you a 10!