I think the motions are fine, shading looks fine to me just a little touch up though. The one thing that bothers me though is the arm. In the top panel the mans arms fit perfectly with his body size but in the bottom two panels the arm looks a little to thick/big. I don't know if its just a big jacket or what. Other than that I really like your comic and hope to see more of this.
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