The Dollhouse pg 7
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The Dollhouse pg 7

Author Comments

I'm still not the best at articulating motion or capturing sound effects :/
Ah, well. In terms of this comic not much will really, reaaaaally bother me. I know it's gonna be a long road to be a comic book artist.

Show me you care, please fave if you like it!

ALSO AUGH JUST NOTICED LIGHTING/BACKGROUND FAIL IN FIRST PANEL
okay, we`re gonna make a new rule: in this universe, light behaves differently. Like, opposites kind of differently. Jeeeeezus.

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I think the motions are fine, shading looks fine to me just a little touch up though. The one thing that bothers me though is the arm. In the top panel the mans arms fit perfectly with his body size but in the bottom two panels the arm looks a little to thick/big. I don't know if its just a big jacket or what. Other than that I really like your comic and hope to see more of this.


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May 4, 2012 | 11:20 AM EDT
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