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This is the first character in my comic and it's not in paint

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Sorry I missed it, I'm been pretty busy with editing my video's and my school so I'm always here, but Happy late birthday? =^.^=

also I i posted this here because I just was look what new stuff you posted...

passworld responds:

thx

Huh.
Okay, there's alot to cover.
The body shape of the character is very strange looking. The back is curved, but the front isn't so it makes the character have an unnatural looking body. On the body, I'm not sure what it's supposed to be but it stands out from the entire character because it isn't properly outlined like every other detail in this picture.
Even the outlines themselves are often lacking in some places. Some parts are outlined too little and some, too much. This makes the character look very off-balance and unappealing. But in your attempts to get rid of the outline when it overlaps, I can see very paint-bucket like filling. Take the bottom halve of the gun and sword, and the hat as an example. Around the hat area, is the head. I can't tell if this is stylistic or just a mistake, but the top of the head doesn't have any filling at all.
A lot of these details clearly lack a reference, which is my best recommendation for a solution. I understand that your software is limited, which explains some of my criticisms but definitely not the body or lack of realism or natural shape in the objects.
I would talk about shading, but this is obviously something you understand, as I can tell from your other drawings.
Overall, a very beginner piece, I hope I was able to bring attention to some problems you might have missed. I look forward to seeing you improve as I believe all artists have the ability to get better over time.

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passworld responds:

XDD

emm you'r 27 years?? xDDD emm okay but you need more practic on then

It's pretty good. But you might want to add a little bit of edges like in the sword to emphasize the sharpness. But all-in-all , it's not bad. Keep it up :)

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