I think this is an amazing art work but i must wonder, where is the mysterious dude that appear in chapter 1 and 2? Is he/she the bird? Also have you thought about writing a small story for this? I know you are trying to tell a story through your art works but a little bit of story or many a one line caption for every chapter may help us to understand what is it that you are trying to say. Overall this is amazing, i think this is the best of the three.