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She's abit of a tease

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tank girl sorta.. just a sketch that went to far XD

WILL PEOPLE STOP GIVING CRITICISM, this drawing is a year old & not meant to be perfect!

(c) 2008

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This was different

Well I have to say this was different but you have a nice style about it I think the body could be polished a bit more more form and more color tone just a tad but overall this was a nice job like it very much and hope you make more

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More polish on the body tone

~X~

Not a bad start at all! Pose; line work's a bit odd, but form and shading not bad overall. Keep it going!

-cd-

geez

NO I DONT WISH. and if you cant take critisim then why even post it? your just sensitive if you know its not perfect then why reply to all these comments, it looks fine its just obviously not your best thats all

Helpful criticism :>

Here's something on how to fix it...the upper part of the stomach sticks out to much....tuck it in a lil bit and u'll make the "akward" comments stop

seriously gtfo :D

ye the pic is cool but why in the name of god would you post it here if you cant take criticism? :DD

OctoJazz responds:

have you seen the crit so far?
ok so it's awkward the body so can you suggest something.. no nothing.

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