So... this is the first part? Kinda strange introduction seeing as I have no idea what's going on. :P Suggestions: add some color to the background/building, make the frame fit the canvas, either make lines more symmetrical or make them less edgy so they don't need to be the same. Keep it going!
Thanks for the Suggestions CD,I'm going to improve the second part with this.
Or you could warp yourself back home.
It's dino-apocalypse,dude,not the ULTIMATE DIGITAL AGE IN THE YEAR 5865.
Como va la segunda parte?ya la empezaste?
La empezare cuando pueda igual es bastante dificil hacerlo.