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Violent Encounter

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Day late and a dollar short to the Violent Encounter contest. Halloween 09.

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Looks okay

I like your take on the Lauch Ness Monster, or however his name is spelled. As for the guy, his head looks like it's set too far back, like his neck doesn't bend back when his head does; I can see his neck curving into his face.

His arms and his head are at a different perspective than the rest of his body; they're set back further and angled toward the viewer than the rest of his body is. And his right forearm is angled toward the viewer more than everything else; his knife appears out place in his hand because it's fitting the same perspective as his arms and head are.

His leg also just juts out of his body in a weird way, it sorta looks like it's a fake limb. It would have been better if you hadn't drawn his leg there at all.

He also appears to be looking at the floor and not at the monster. If you distanced them apart more it would work in that aspect.

Occluded responds:

WARNING TO EVERYONE:
DON'T EVER REVIEW THIS KID.

Unless you want every single piece you've done reviewed as some sort of crazy revenge. He doesn't really know what he's talking about, and he'll put up the pretense of being constructive so he can feel good about himself. But read his reviews and ask yourself. Does it seem like he's trying to help? Or like he's trying to look like he's trying to help.

Longer explanation here:
http://www.newgrounds.com/bbs/topic/1211940/1
Seriously. All my work.

Looks awesome!

I especially like the design for the fishman. Great job!

Occluded responds:

Thanks man. I needed that. It's kinda getting panned here. I'm assuming it was your vote that brought it back to a 3.

Plus it's nice to get props from one of the better artists here. I think I first ran across your work during the Heavy Metal Contest. Good stuff.

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Nov 1, 2009
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