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Flying free

Finished commission for Zephyr of their nightfury character Apollo :)

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CactusDragon

2016-02-22 13:48:30

Loooove this!! I adore the perspective regarding the neck and head! The general line of motion is awesome, the curvature of the body compared to the opposite curvature of the top of the waterfall shifts your eyes around the piece.
I do agree with other reviews on the landscape, it's a bit odd and doesn't flow as much as it could. I'd also like to see less detail or less sharpness in the water and landscape for a more dramatic effect of distance. Overall, I love it, well done!

~CD~

Nievaris responds:

I am sorry that my response took me soo long. Thanks a lot for your words and your critique :) Also for pointing out the thing of the lines of the dragon and the waterfall, I didn't realize it at all, thehe.

PlagueDocterNick

2015-09-08 19:44:26

The water for this looks fantastic, with all the waves and the waterfall, nice. The area next to the water however is a bit bland and the perspective makes the landscape look a bit "off" to me.

Nievaris responds:

Thanks a lot :) Yes I think the perspective of the land is indeed a bit off, but I'm still learning a lot about landscapes so thanks for the feedback :D